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Lesaga Bewahr

Published: Jan 8, 2013

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Description

Name: Lesaga Bewahr
Trollian handle: [AA] AmateurArtist
Age: 6.92 sweeps (calculator used : [link])
Gender: female
Blood caste: Cerulean Blue
Hive: A hollow giant tree stump ( [link] )
Modus: Rune Modus ( Mix of Pictionary and Memory)
Strife specibus: Featherkind
Symbol: A feather
Land:
Consort:
Moon: Prospit
God Tier: Seer of Void
Matesprit: none
Moirail: none
Kismesis: none
Auspistice: none
Lusus: Chameleon Beast ( Cham-dad)
Ancestor: The Chronicler , The Keeper of Secrets, The Preserver of Truths, Destroyer of Lies
([link] )
Beforan Counterpart: Helena/Aneleh(Still thinking of a name) Bewahr
Prototypings:
Personality: Lesaga is often absentminded and slow,she is oblivious to many things, although especially she should be able to see the secret things. She is braver than she looks and although quiet at first she will be the loudest in the end. she tries to get along with everyone.
Quirk: She starts and ends everything with =-= ,which is not a frown but a symbol for an open book to her. Uses "..." very often and capitalizes f as the big F looks like a feather to her.
Quote: "=-= Hello... i believe we didn't meet yet,did we? I am Lesaga Bewahr...i...I believe it be as Fate that we met right now... yes...yes a pleasure to meet you... =-= "

A little bit of Story: Lesaga Bewahr lives with her Cham-dad a giant Chameleon beast Lusus that has 6 legs. She is as low as her Lusus ,who feeds itself by hunting and catching flying prey. Ever so often she gets the remains of its feast, which are mostly feathers or a legs or wing. Lesaga is befriended with Khaose a Teal blood that tends to do underground fashion shows? However it is his fault that she now wears a vest.

Rune Modus: Instead of drawing the object you want to captchalogue you have to draw runes. The Card will show you wish rune is needed and then you have to draw the same rune. However the card will not show the object but the Rune ,you have to memorize what is under the rune ,or simply guess when you need the object. Usually this would be problematic for most,even for Lesaga herself ,but once time processes ,it would be an easy thing for a Seer of void,to guess which rune holds which object.

Strife Specibus: Featherkind to fight with that you draw specific Runes which do certain effects,however you don't know many runes and hope to discover more.

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I never made a fantroll before by the way her name is a mix of Hel and Sága . Hel means "one who covers up or hides something" and Sága means "to see" but can also mean Seer. The Seer that sees hidden things?
Helsaga was too long so i swapped Hel and removed the H ,the Beforan counterpart is named Helena . Furthermore Bewahr is the german word for 'preserve' ,'Keep' .
If you want to roleplay just pm me here or hit me on Pesterchum

A bit critique could be needed!

Lesaga Bewahr and the Ancestor belong to me.

Homestuck belongs to Andrew Hussie

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leviporn

Feb 19, 2013

Hello!

First off I want to start with your trolls physical appearance- I like her hair a lot; it’s super cute! She is a bit young to have so much pigment in her eyes though; maybe make it a bit more on the dark grey/blue side? Not really a huge deal anyway. Her outfit almost borderlines on the “too much color side” but it is acceptable (maybe more black and less white- white would stand out a bit and cause trouble; black blends better); I like the geometric flow of the outfit; ties nicely with the feather strife. On her horns, is the blue a ribbon tied in or are they actually blue? If the blue is actually there I have to tell you that’s not really possible, unless you can back the mutation.

Her name isn’t bad and follows the 6x6 rule (which is good) but it’s a bit hard to say; doesn't flow you know? (I do like the thought you put into it though- so you definitely don’t have to change it) I don’t know how the feather design ties into her character- being that her lusus is a Chameleon; the whole design of the character should be influenced by her lusus. As for the hive; it’s not bad but I expected more a tree “top” than “trunk” ; the biome should be some sort of tropical rainforest- seeing as most of the worlds chameleons live in Madagascar (fun fact just for you ;u

As for her dancestor- some names I think would suit better are Mutati, (comes from the word mutatio which means change in Latin- for the fact that chameleons change their color) Misceo, Miscui, Mixtum , (all mean blend in Latin) Lacert, or Acerta (derive from Lacerta- meaning lizard) The thought you put into it is nice- but sounds too human.

I think her personality ties with her lusus better than her design and strife seeing as she is “slow” and “absentminded”; I also like how you say she starts quiet and becomes loud- makes me think of a blending chameleon turning vibrant or clashing with the background or surroundings if that makes sense. For a bit of her physical you could make her appear overlooked but when finally noticed you see a certain vibrancy or glow about her. I don’t know just an idea, hehe.

Her quirk could use some work; the "…" works for her slowness but the face at end and beginning seem a bit random. You could try to incorporate ~ in there like a tail or tongue maybe? Quirks are difficult and take a lot of work…

Her strife is a bit hard to understand- could use some work… I don't really see how you could accurately fight with a feather and runes; but I suppose there are magical properties at play that would help (like Rose's needles)

I think I touched base on all the important points of this troll! I like her design thus fore and can definitely see her becoming really great as you improve- good first fantroll definitely!